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Friday, December 12, 2008

Falsetto

Night was dead asleep

When-

Unnoticebly-

In grave silence our bodies

entwined.

Yes in deep silence

you let me burrow in your arms

and breasts.

that nyte was different 

that nyte-yes

that nyte an oyster opened a pearl

 that nyte i found meaning

that nyte-you birthed me

again.

25 comments:

Kin'shar said...

hmmm, interesting...I was somehow was feeling death...then love...now birth.


I didnt know how to read this...although its deep!!



* what retard....LOL*

Kin'shar said...

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I was first..






oh and now second

Emeka Amakeze said...

Why rebirth?

Emeka Amakeze said...

Why rebirth?

Moze said...

UUMMM i have to read this again,,deep

K said...

This is actually quite a deep poem and it really is open to interpretation but my interpretation leads me to think that, that moment between man and woman that is pure and precious like a pearl can be equated to a rebirth in person. Or maybe I am over thinking it??? LOL

Reason why I thought of rebirth is that there is the story of men who after abstaining from sex for awhile and then have sex it is like being reborn.

eizzy.k said...

yeah, i felt that 2 Kin'shar,
and u have a point there K...

They say reaching an orgasm is quite a revitalising experience, perhaps thats what marks the transition from death to rebirth in this peice...

theres a sense of intensity in it as well...perhaps its the silence, the repetition of 'that nyte'...

its very clear it was a special night to you.

Robyn said...

@k,MY POETRY BETRAYS ME.NO BETTER WAY TO EXPLAIN IT

Standtall said...

Interesting!

Princess said...

That right there is pretty intense!

*but why the title, 'falsetto'?

Robyn said...

@Princess webster defines Falsetto as "an unnaturally or artificially high-pitched voice or register, esp. in a man." must i say more

Princess said...

Yes, now it makes sense. LOL! :D

The True Urban Queen aka Sharon said...

I thought I got it til I got to the rebirth part. . .
There I was feeling all sensual then I was like huh.

After reading all the comments especially K I think I get it.

And I knew the title (at least when I first saw it) meant high singing. . .oh oh oh (sing it high).

So I think I get it.

dag this is a long comment. I just rambled.

deonte' k said...

Interesting. This was deep tho!

Moze said...

so i get it now finally shet am i that slow,,i get your thang bro

Robyn said...

@moze..took you a while bro.Never too late.tHIS WASNT AN EASY POEM FOR ME.WENT THROUGH LOTS OF EDITS AND STUFF

Poetry in the Global Box said...

You are phenomenal -- what a thoughtful and intense poem...I can almost feel the rapture.

Lindah said...

Tiz kinda brain teaser. Nice and touching.

Robyn said...

@ poetry in a global box.thanks i apreciate the love
@ linda.Been a while how are you.?

Mista Jaycee said...

Cool! I dig this piece!
Jaycee

lulu said...

my goodnessss boy! you should tell derik to read this, he may identify with this totally...as intense as linda said it be! wow

poeticallytinted said...

Ahem!wait a minute, might have to take off my jacket it's a bit hot in here!

but that line...

"you let me burrow in your arms and breasts"

...for me, doesn't quite fit the rest of it. It sort of threw me for a bit.

But I love it though just like everything you write.

Robyn said...

@poeticallytinted ITS ABOUT TIME SOMEONE COMMENTED ON THAT THANKS MATE.
@lulu WHICH DERICK LOL

Jackie E. said...

this is VERY interesting. i had to read it a couple of times and i'm still not wholly sure i get it but it's deep and thought provoking which i like. i feel like it could be agape love or eros love....hmmm

Ugandan girl said...

As you said Peotry is like a woman.
If its beautiful its unfaithful and betrays you..If its faithful then its so ugly..this is simply beautiful...i like...xx

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