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Sunday, February 1, 2009

Untitled ( For Claire ) Part 2

Love
breathes
down my spine
onto my heart
into my soul.
I lie-
wordless
thoughtless
and watch
in disbelief .
Tonyte,this nyte-
Claire-my first
object of infatuation
rests
peacefully
jet-lagged,
in my arms.

39 comments:

Pro's Hood said...

this was insanely awesome the intro blew me away!

thegayte-keeper said...

this is the kinda LOVE that wraps you up and keep you forever...

Princess said...

Ooh! Ooh! Is this true? :-)

Temite said...

wow. love it.

Miss Cheri said...

Wake her up and show her "some love".

Anonymous said...

Apr9.....

That must be such a good feeling

deonte' k said...

Great poem boy.. I love ur writing. ;)

neema divine said...

aaaaaw, this is some deep love. it feels good from where i am.

K said...

aaawwww just in time for V day dude! This is too sweet! I hope I become someone's object of infatuation...in a non stalker kind of way obviously...lol. I'm good how are you?

Funms-the rebirth said...

someone beta luv me like this......

poeticallytinted said...

I know how (you) feel, most of all I know how she feels.

Oyin said...

thanks for the much love bruh....umm seems like youve fallen in love.


who's the lucky gal!!

StandTall-The Activist said...

Love is a beautiful thing

When will you do the tag? (lol)

Shishi said...

LUCKY GURL..VERY GURL.

Robyn said...

@Pro's Hood thanks.i gat lov 4 u
@Princess too much
@Miss Cheri i wish hun
@Apr9 yes it is
@deonte' k thank you
@K am vry fine thankyou
@StandTall-The Activist asap.next post

Oyin said...

Hey you didnt shout me out.... :(

Pro's Hood said...

*hugs robyn* im well sunshine...hope all is well in your world poet :0) you know i linger for inspiration.

Robyn said...

@oyin ishould hung for that.Ill tell.

Angel said...

How beautiful babe, for that moment I imagined myself laying there relaxed and happy in my mans arms!!

Buttercup said...

awww wow..

lulu said...

hmmmm but you aand claire in sinful pleasures come i lay hands on you ....

Tha BossMack TopSoil said...

Words falling like snowflakes on tha crowd.

~ScotchBiscuits~ said...

She needs to wake up and read this!

Poetry in the Global Box said...

This poem wraps itself around you...nice!

eclecticsoul said...

beautiful. you have mad talent.

Ugandan girl said...

you really love this girl..

Safyre said...

Jet-lagged?! Some 'flight' that must've been.. Love is known to lift even the heaviest to great heights...

Jackie E. said...

I've been Claire before and it is definitely an AWESOME feeling!!! You just described it better than I ever could...

SilverBow said...

oh you hopeless hopeless romantic you.
naye(but) claire?????!!!!!????!!!11

feather said...

drew one of those secret smiles from me.

Oyin said...

soooooooooooo...who is she??

Robyn said...

@Oyin my bestfriend

bob-ij said...

WOW!....I can almost hear the breath of love, like oxygen. You really inspire me. I hope you're in love though! :D

Remi, United Kingdom said...

***sigh*** the simplity of this poem is beautiful, I can picture the scene ... :-)))

Trecia said...

Thanks for stopping by... nice!

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Rita said...

This is so beautiful (especially the tonyte part :-))

I like, I like

Nahjaj said...

nice :-)

Journey of a Poet said...

WoW! Robyn you are a wonderfully awesome Writer!

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