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Sunday, July 12, 2009

Quest

Take me
to a place so far
away.

Take me
to a place
where i am greeted
by the scent of
morning dew.
where-
like i boy
i can dance to
the rhythm of the rain
and
listen to the whispers
of the wind.
Take me
to this place;
a place
ive only dreamt of
and written about
in poems.

Take me to this place
and leave me there
to rest.
Take me-
to place so far from here.


Ps:Dedicated to the walking man(i hope you love it).Thank you for your criticism-it has helped me write better.Am still workin on my punctuation.

26 comments:

Sleek said...

where is this place?

normzo said...

another beatiful one.....

will i get a poem for myself, if i criticise YOU...hahaa.

Damn i wish i knew anything about poetry

blogoratti said...

Reads like a song...
Nice!

Robyn said...

@blogoratti thought of that.

Jaycee said...

I really like this poem. I do!

Anonymous said...

u know, ure he only person whose poetry i read; honestly i'm too shallow to appreciate poetry. yours however, oi can identify with.thank you.
hope u are fine.

silverbow

the walking man said...

I can only humbly thank you for the dedication Robyn and hope that you soon find that the place you seek is within you and you are already there.

Thank You.

Mudamuli said...

Sounds emphatic on going to this place. I like it.

Funms-the rebirth said...

Wow! I can imagine how beautiful this place will be!
Simply peaceful

feather said...

me too. i want to go there. i like.

Mjay said...

I'm coming with you.

Oyin said...

Walking man is a really cool dude. I think he found me from your blog Robin. Nice to see him around. Nice hun!

You on facebook?

The poets voice ~~~ said...

This is a beautiful piece...It reminds me of how i feel when I write a poem or read a book, I'm transported to another world entirely; a place where only my imagination can keep alive!

Robyn said...

@oyin nope but am on twitter

Biro Chic said...

Eden...
When you find that place, count me in..

ManCee said...

I agree with Blogoratti on this.
Meanwhile, be sure what you desire.
The place of ultimate rest, wherever that is, seems definitely not on earth.
maybe tis the fabled garden of eden...

Moze said...

this place could be stess free.

Robyn said...

@sleek i wish i knew
@silverbow am very fine dear

Trybes said...

Very nice worded Robyn..Beautiful..Keep the torch burning..

Safyre said...

Heaven? Shangri-la? Avalon? Valhalla? Whatever that place is, it sure is sweet!!

lulu said...

sleek that place exists witihn you... i have a poem that ends this searching love...how are you? its been awhile!

eclecticsoul said...

i want to go there too. this was really well written.

David E. Patton said...

Poetry will take you ther for sure and once you have been there you want to go again and again. Good poem
David

poetry said...

Dude.. you have inspired me to try my hand at freeverse! I like this one particularly.. simple and emotive at the same time!

danny

Angel said...

esacpe! I love it...take me there :)

Poet & Writer said...

I love this poem Robyn!

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