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Sunday, October 31, 2010

Lonelines Part 1



Call me a liar
Say it to my face
let it sink in
let it marinate in
my rage,let it drown
in my loneliness.
What a fool i was-
For believing there
was someone here;
I need to feel it,
all the way in,stab me with
those words,like a dagger,
turn it,get some flesh
let my tears flow
let me shout out all the pain
till there is no more sound in me,
till there are no more tears in me.
Look at me,as i lie there,mute
In my tears.Bend down
towards me look into my eyes and slowly
whisper these words to me
"You are Lonely,you are alone
in this small world of yours"
...to be continued

10 comments:

Mjay said...

Aw! that hurt, the pain is so real.

Hope you are good otherwise, you've been MIA.

NovemberMiracle said...

Sounds familiar.

this world isnt too big that you wouldnt find love. May it show up at your doorstep soon :D

Poet and Writer said...

Profound and I adore the metaphor, exquisite.

therisingpage said...

Very real!

Robyn said...

thank you all very much.
I try.

Maua said...

Recovered?

Poetry in the Global Box said...

This is wonderful! I long for Part II...Robyn come back.

ManCee said...

Nice.
Reaally nice.
Feels rather real, I can identify.

ps: I daresay more attempt at rhyme would have made it insanely wicked, eg ...'marinate', instead of 'marinate in', to rhyme better with 'my face'.

Safe bro.

Be silent said...

Kinda my place right now

Cguyra said...

I feel u on this one ...

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