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Wednesday, October 10, 2012

AN EXTRACT FROM FIRST WEEK OF A BREAK UP BY RAFEAL CASAL

See I keep wanting to invite you over but love can’t live here anymore, she might bring her children. Jealousy, and Neglect. Those who run around my crib always breaking shit and I can’t seem to clean up fast enough. They tend to ruin romantic moments with questions and lies, and I can see their children when I look into their eyes. It’s you and I. Not sure when we had them, but now they live in the next room. Always barging in talking bout they having nightmares and can they sleep with us too? Jealousy dreams about deceiving so that’s what we do. Live out each other’s nightmares until were bed full of problems and solving’s not an option cause’ solutions ain’t new. Neglect keeps me in bed talking bout I don’t love her like You and Jealousy. I know I must’ve told her that but both of them still look so much like you.

14 comments:

KWIVUGA said...

I must say.....DEEP!!!!
THANKS FOR THE EXTRACT

Aba T said...

WWhoa...nice

Robyn said...

@Aba T : Thanks that's what I thought too

the walking man said...

Robyn, Definitely time for a MUCH bigger house where those kids can live in their own wing...unfortunately that is only a temporary solution because eventually the little brats grow to adulthood and by then you're too old to deal with them.

best to slay those particular children early on.

You haven't lost a beat on your rhythm my friend. You lay it right out there as short and sweet as possible. Love the write.

Robyn said...

@The walking Man: Its been a while my Friend. But am glad you like the Extract.

Robyn said...

@KWIVUGA:YOUR WELCOME

Rebirth said...

You found me :)

Robyn.K.Y said...

@Rebirth YES!!!!!!!

Kafo said...

you had me from the first sentence
i love it

Robyn.K.Y said...

@KAFO i know the feeling.

the walking man said...

Nice to see you Robyn, what's happening?

lulu said...

My oh my. I feel so rusted reading this

lulu said...

How r u love

Eaton Bennett said...

Hi Robyn, it was so good to see you had visited my photo blog. Thank you for leaving such a welcome, encouraging and heart felt comment.

You nailed it with this piece!!!! Boot those 'kids' out,
there's no room for them. They just get greedier and greedier, until they swallow us up.

Eaton

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