Untitled ( For Claire ) Part 2

Love
breathes
down my spine
onto my heart
into my soul.
I lie-
wordless
thoughtless
and watch
in disbelief .
Tonyte,this nyte-
Claire-my first
object of infatuation
rests
peacefully
jet-lagged,
in my arms.
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Pro's Hood said…
this was insanely awesome the intro blew me away!
February 1, 2009 at 10:28 PM
Unknown said…
this is the kinda LOVE that wraps you up and keep you forever...
February 1, 2009 at 10:31 PM
Princess said…
Ooh! Ooh! Is this true? :-)
February 1, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Anonymous said…
wow. love it.
February 2, 2009 at 12:45 AM
Anonymous said…
Wake her up and show her "some love".
February 2, 2009 at 12:56 AM
Anonymous said…
Apr9.....

That must be such a good feeling
February 2, 2009 at 3:56 AM
deonte' k said…
Great poem boy.. I love ur writing. ;)
February 2, 2009 at 4:21 AM
Anonymous said…
aaaaaw, this is some deep love. it feels good from where i am.
February 2, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Kookie said…
aaawwww just in time for V day dude! This is too sweet! I hope I become someone's object of infatuation...in a non stalker kind of way obviously...lol. I'm good how are you?
February 2, 2009 at 6:25 AM
Rebirth said…
someone beta luv me like this......
February 2, 2009 at 9:47 AM
poeticallytinted said…
I know how (you) feel, most of all I know how she feels.
February 2, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Anonymous said…
thanks for the much love bruh....umm seems like youve fallen in love.


who's the lucky gal!!
February 2, 2009 at 2:10 PM
The Activist said…
Love is a beautiful thing

When will you do the tag? (lol)
February 2, 2009 at 2:46 PM
Shishi said…
LUCKY GURL..VERY GURL.
February 2, 2009 at 7:10 PM
Robyn.K.Y said…
@Pro's Hood thanks.i gat lov 4 u
@Princess too much
@Miss Cheri i wish hun
@Apr9 yes it is
@deonte' k thank you
@K am vry fine thankyou
@StandTall-The Activist asap.next post
February 2, 2009 at 7:13 PM
Anonymous said…
Hey you didnt shout me out.... :(
February 2, 2009 at 10:46 PM
Pro's Hood said…
*hugs robyn* im well sunshine...hope all is well in your world poet :0) you know i linger for inspiration.
February 3, 2009 at 5:31 AM
Robyn.K.Y said…
@oyin ishould hung for that.Ill tell.
February 3, 2009 at 1:42 PM
Angel said…
How beautiful babe, for that moment I imagined myself laying there relaxed and happy in my mans arms!!
February 3, 2009 at 5:39 PM
lulu said…
hmmmm but you aand claire in sinful pleasures come i lay hands on you ....
February 3, 2009 at 8:08 PM
Tha BossMack TopSoil said…
Words falling like snowflakes on tha crowd.
February 3, 2009 at 11:59 PM
~ScotchBiscuits~ said…
She needs to wake up and read this!
February 4, 2009 at 12:15 AM
Poetry in the Global Box said…
This poem wraps itself around you...nice!
February 4, 2009 at 8:05 AM
eclecticsoul said…
beautiful. you have mad talent.
February 4, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Ugandan girl said…
you really love this girl..
February 5, 2009 at 2:57 PM
Safyre said…
Jet-lagged?! Some 'flight' that must've been.. Love is known to lift even the heaviest to great heights...
February 5, 2009 at 11:21 PM
Jackie E. said…
I've been Claire before and it is definitely an AWESOME feeling!!! You just described it better than I ever could...
February 6, 2009 at 2:46 AM
SilverBow said…
oh you hopeless hopeless romantic you.
naye(but) claire?????!!!!!????!!!11
February 6, 2009 at 2:16 PM
feather said…
drew one of those secret smiles from me.
February 6, 2009 at 6:35 PM
Anonymous said…
soooooooooooo...who is she??
February 7, 2009 at 5:28 AM
Robyn.K.Y said…
@Oyin my bestfriend
February 7, 2009 at 6:53 PM
bob-ij said…
WOW!....I can almost hear the breath of love, like oxygen. You really inspire me. I hope you're in love though! :D
February 10, 2009 at 9:37 AM
Remi, United Kingdom said…
***sigh*** the simplity of this poem is beautiful, I can picture the scene ... :-)))
February 11, 2009 at 3:26 AM
Anonymous said…
Thanks for stopping by... nice!
February 11, 2009 at 4:59 AM
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February 22, 2009 at 5:17 AM
Rita said…
This is so beautiful (especially the tonyte part :-))

I like, I like
February 25, 2009 at 1:14 AM
Anonymous said…
WoW! Robyn you are a wonderfully awesome Writer!
March 3, 2009 at 11:28 PM
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