Quest
Take me
to a place so far
away.
Take me
to a place
where i am greeted
by the scent of
morning dew.
where-
like i boy
i can dance to
the rhythm of the rain
and
listen to the whispers
of the wind.
Take me
to this place;
a place
ive only dreamt of
and written about
in poems.
Take me to this place
and leave me there
to rest.
Take me-
to place so far from here.
Ps:Dedicated to the walking man(i hope you love it).Thank you for your criticism-it has helped me write better.Am still workin on my punctuation.
Comments
will i get a poem for myself, if i criticise YOU...hahaa.
Damn i wish i knew anything about poetry
Nice!
hope u are fine.
silverbow
Thank You.
Simply peaceful
You on facebook?
When you find that place, count me in..
Meanwhile, be sure what you desire.
The place of ultimate rest, wherever that is, seems definitely not on earth.
maybe tis the fabled garden of eden...
@silverbow am very fine dear
David
danny