AN EXTRACT FROM FIRST WEEK OF A BREAK UP BY RAFEAL CASAL
See I keep wanting to invite you over but love can’t live here anymore, she might bring her children. Jealousy, and Neglect. Those who run around my crib always breaking shit and I can’t seem to clean up fast enough. They tend to ruin romantic moments with questions and lies, and I can see their children when I look into their eyes. It’s you and I. Not sure when we had them, but now they live in the next room. Always barging in talking bout they having nightmares and can they sleep with us too? Jealousy dreams about deceiving so that’s what we do. Live out each other’s nightmares until were bed full of problems and solving’s not an option cause’ solutions ain’t new. Neglect keeps me in bed talking bout I don’t love her like You and Jealousy. I know I must’ve told her that but both of them still look so much like you.
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THANKS FOR THE EXTRACT
best to slay those particular children early on.
You haven't lost a beat on your rhythm my friend. You lay it right out there as short and sweet as possible. Love the write.
i love it
You nailed it with this piece!!!! Boot those 'kids' out,
there's no room for them. They just get greedier and greedier, until they swallow us up.
Eaton