Pain (Part II)
This poem is not about love-
or writing my verses
all over you.
This poem is about you-
about that voice in you
that is always silenced.
This is about the tears
you cry behind the
bathroom door.
This is about you
strangely
staring at yourself
in the mirror.
This is about that child
in you that is oppressed
and rejected.
This is about questions-
unanswered questions.
This is about forgiveness
and reasons why you wont
let go.
This poem is not about Love-
No- this is about YOU-
This is about PAIN:
Comments
get stronger in the second stanza
and bloody lose me in the third!!!
But..the second stanza is "mad-crazy" dawg!!
And yes I am expecting your ass over at mine for an honest critique! :-))
K
I like the tone you take Robyn through this piece. it builds in intensity leading the reader to think you are talking to another, instructing them. It slams me when I realize the narrator is talking to himself.
absolutely (as usual) stunning.
Nice!
@k i have missed you.