Falsetto
Night was dead asleep
When-
Unnoticebly-
In grave silence our bodies
entwined.
Yes in deep silence
you let me burrow in your arms
and breasts.
that nyte was different
that nyte-yes
that nyte an oyster opened a pearl
that nyte i found meaning
that nyte-you birthed me
again.
Comments
I didnt know how to read this...although its deep!!
* what retard....LOL*
oh and now second
Reason why I thought of rebirth is that there is the story of men who after abstaining from sex for awhile and then have sex it is like being reborn.
and u have a point there K...
They say reaching an orgasm is quite a revitalising experience, perhaps thats what marks the transition from death to rebirth in this peice...
theres a sense of intensity in it as well...perhaps its the silence, the repetition of 'that nyte'...
its very clear it was a special night to you.
*but why the title, 'falsetto'?
There I was feeling all sensual then I was like huh.
After reading all the comments especially K I think I get it.
And I knew the title (at least when I first saw it) meant high singing. . .oh oh oh (sing it high).
So I think I get it.
dag this is a long comment. I just rambled.
@ linda.Been a while how are you.?
Jaycee
but that line...
"you let me burrow in your arms and breasts"
...for me, doesn't quite fit the rest of it. It sort of threw me for a bit.
But I love it though just like everything you write.
@lulu WHICH DERICK LOL
If its beautiful its unfaithful and betrays you..If its faithful then its so ugly..this is simply beautiful...i like...xx