Behind closed doors

Sound is burried
here,silence is
embraced.
its just me-
nothing more
and nothing less.

Thoughts of
broken promises,
memories of
a love forgotten,
tears of
a heart broken.
But still-
a scent of you,
fond memories
of you.

For years i have
prayed here
for years i have
mourned here,
only to the audience
of these four walls
and the mockery
of loneliness.

Behind these
walls i birth myself
for tomorrow.
Behind these four
walls a MAN is made:

Comments

akaBagucci said…
excellent as usual...
Myne said…
Your header is very catching. First time here and I like your flow, well done.
Mrs.O said…
Nice! - The moulding of the heart and mind behind those closed doors.

*Is broken written as "brocken" on purpose?
Robyn.K.Y said…
@Mjay Corrected thanks alot.
@Myne Whitman-i bow
Safyre said…
With such talent, the sky can't even be the limit..
lulu said…
child! your poetry makes me want to cry! lovely!
Ugandan girl said…
of late i have been addicted to def jam - on youtube though.. and hun it would be nice to see you recite yours...
Kissyfur said…
And I thought good poetry was lost untill I wandered here.
Anonymous said…
Hmmm, hey hun...havent seen your blog in ages. Thanks to lulu I got back in touch with you. Havent been around much on bloggers lately too because of my new edition...see my page for more. Youve been missing out on my latest news. :)
petesmama said…
"Behind these walls I birth myself for tomorrow."

Excellent stuff. As always, you move me.
LilSweetpea18 said…
I really enjoyed this. It is a little on the sad side, but still very beautiful!
Princess said…
You've been gone for ages. This was good. Don't disappear again!
Please come back. Miss you. lol.
Anonymous said…
Deep stuff man. Respect.

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